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Serendipity and Snowfall

I am la vie en rose, a newborn with as many mini bones in my body as possibilities. Lovelily, I am potential waiting to be tapped into. I am a spectrum of light, serenity in the symmetry of a snowflake. I come veiled in lace from everlasting love's womb with my budding, fresh, goose-flesh tucked tenderly underneath. I spread my spirit wide, outstretching my feather-tips &, supplicated by twizzles, I catch my ballerina's foot & fly. In these fleeting, finite moments of ubermensch suspension in multiple salchows comes clairvoyance, a kindness beyond the absolution of mundane minds. With the key to perfection being repetition, I pray you

Featured

14 deviations
Literature

The Witch Speaks

Reality is A cat and its ball of string Now watch it unwind

Magical Haiku Contest

6 deviations
Literature

Trick or Treat: Wild Spirits

When bats flutter restlessly and Coffin-lids rattle spookily, Ghosts creep across the cemetery and Pale corpses resurrect. When wet foliage crunches demonically and The grave-digger stalks silently, Witches fly with the broom. Vampires get their food. When cannibals’ stomachs growl and Black cats purr softly, Wolves howl at night. Death awakens from his sleep. When skeletons stride shakily and Goblins ride on bones, Satan cries out for mercy. Now Halloween is not so far. Spirits sneak from house to house and Ring all the people out. For this, to thank them now you shall bring Your best chocolate bars out of your closet.

Trick or Treat Contest

7 deviations
Literature

Neuter

I want to hear your voices scream, rant, or rave a viable response when you have to save. A copious amount is all that it takes to fix the top dogs and correct their mistakes. My guilty pleasure centers on erasing these censors who's censoring and debasing makes cheap my belief in relief from the grief I chase in my dreams and throughout therebetween.

traditional + fixed

4662 deviations
My Night Sky

Concrete + Visual

477 deviations
Literature

Kidney Stones

Shackled to a song Not even a Symphony Watching my mind soak in the notes Which I drown in fermented beverage For how else can I choke this verse Of all the plagues it has unleashed It is not done so that I can sing But to show that another song can be sung Yet if I must Sing I shall rise to the pulpit and conduct A hymn of pure silence Until I am inspired by my audience Waiting for this inspiration I shall hold my nations flag And let the cold winds of a Country bear down And grant mute audience to my Harmony Had us a laudable purpose I would have already been singing But as majesty would prevail I find myself enjoying the Darkness And watching all the trash Crumble away Like Kidney stones none of us need.

Songs + Lyrics

762 deviations
Literature

as we drag our feet to non-existent sand

Many took for granted a kind heart to a gentle hand guided to misguided places, a keep sake, the abandonment; was a crescent moon to a fertile land. where we fell to loss and victory we tied  this noose to  tomorrows  forgiveness, as we drag our feet to non-existent sand the message we drew had washed away; are we bound to a moment a fingertip on time we planted while staring to forever are we the breath of confinement those stole out wishes. I saw sadness in life, do we grow poor  or grow  riches memories;  we treasure  

free + blank verse

4064 deviations
Literature

Halloween Poem (4)

The dead are powerless to tell us what to do and the living are struggling just to make it through Meanwhile the ragtag angels scour our alleyways searching for food Everything is so terribly bright in the middle of yet, another lonely night I look at the clock but it has no face its hands are gone It’s ashamed of how its invention has caused such harm I am too There’s some Liquid-Drano in the cabinet I consider shooting it into my vein Then I remember asylums can only be altered but never really changed I gaze out a window and I see the assassin is near He stares up at the sun but instead seeing the moon Laughs to himself and says: “Oh, my I’m way too soon” Listlessly, I drift out of my body down the stairs There’s an old man in a chair He cuts out his entrails and sadly states: "It's the best I can do, so please try to relate” I splash scorching acid in my eyes as if it could serve as some disguise Voices drift by on a breeze telling me it’s almost morning and I’ve got to

Prompts

98 deviations

Critique Me Please

154 deviations
Literature

Shiver In The Snow

The small icy needles pricking my cheeks, The brushing of wind, Making me shiver with delight. The snow falls. The white crystals cling to my hair, I brush my cheek where a flake has clung for life on. The ice slips and cackles under my feet. It's a silent night. The bright moon glitters above, Stars shine brighter as the small snow falls slowly, The night is perfect, beautiful, incredible, A shiver in the snow awakes my senses. The shiver is released.

A Winter Only World - CLOSED

18 deviations
Literature

On The Train

There’s a happy couple behind me. That hurts, because that’s how I wanna be- But you’re in the window, speeding past me. It must be love and I know that’s all I need; But I’m headed back home and you’re not here- Gonna be 28 days and 8 hours and 10 minutes before you’re near. Or longer, I fear. . It’s like reversing gravity Or making the moon too bright to see -That’s why my eyes are red And I’m feeling mighty shitty. How am I supposed to write poetry Without a muse to see Or a hand to hold? . And with these chuckling idiots behind me? I want to be them, But we’re in that train

Critiqued Works

637 deviations
Literature

Dear Cassandra

Dear Cassandra, The idea of writing to you is very scary. You and I are essentially the same person but your entire existence is a piece of paper. Oh paper self, oh paper self, How flappy are your arms? Do they wave in the wind or jiggle at a touch? Are they life like, or flesh like or are they just paper arms? Oh paper self, oh paper self, how thin and lifeless are you? Do you wither in the rain or crumble between hands? Are you life-like or flesh-like or are you just a paper heart? Oh paper self, oh paper self, how graceful and perfect are you? Do you parade around in fancy clothes or wear those Jimmy Choo’s? Are you life-like

Love Letter To Yourself Contest - CLOSED

22 deviations
Literature

World Serpent Slayer

Jormungand, the world serpent, uncoiling the ‘workings’ of the world [the seas] [reference; the ‘current’ mechanisms of the world (internet, technology, economy, etc)] Maintains by completing a circle by biting his tail, keeping the waters from running off. Bull’s Head The head of [current] civilization, Thor possibly used this to see if he could fish up the world serpent. Thor, seeking the world serpent, uses this severed head to fish for jourmungand. The world serpent is revealed, but the Seas become calamitous [big changes, very quickly] [serpent revealed, admin access!] [calamitous seas, the workings of the world are observed to be in peril. Or at least could use a tune up.] The Bulls head, and Thors ability are no match for chance, the hook is dislodged, the bait is lost and jourmungand slithers calmly back into the sea. The Seas themselves are calm once more. Oh, time to raise another Bull too, that one is kinda not here anymore. 😊

Found and Title Poetry

169 deviations
Literature

:: This Little Equinox ::

The warm emeralds transcend through the winds of change; cooling and falling.

The Gigantic Generosity Giveaway - CLOSED

18 deviations
Literature

Impractical Magic

He brews under a full moon in a circle of salt. Pearl dust and asphodel infused with lavender and magic and bound with honey. A sprinkle of starthistle and cinnamon, the incantation whispered, his elixir complete. He visits the greenhouse that very night moonlight plentiful and bright to harvest fresh silverweed and thyme. Then to the forest he walks in search of bloodroot moonstone, and midnight blooming foxglove. His cauldron awaits. Belladonna and bone soaked then steeped in a mixture of fairy wings, rosewater and a drop of wormwood essence. Mulling the concoction until a fine mist rises and sparkles. Decanted his potions shimmer, vials of the unimaginable, the impossible- liquid luck shrouded in gold, the swirling scarlet of love, the amber hued solution that will.. bend the will of the drinker… to his. He stands back a moment, smiling to himself, at his creations, gleaming in the torchlight, luminous in their perfection. His tools to enchant, to intoxicate and ensnare.

Free and Blank Verse II

4407 deviations
Literature

Blitzen's lament

Blitzen the plain old reindeer Had a very normal nose And if you ever saw it You’d see it’s as plain as it goes All of the other children Used to know Blitzen’s name Then along came Rudolph And ruined all their games On that fatal Christmas Eve Santa said to him “Rudolph with your nose so bright Won’t you guide my sleigh tonight?” (Which is illogical because really, Rudolph’s never driven the sleigh before, and it wasn’t even that dark, and we nearly ran into three houses anyways...) But never mind ... Soon all the children loved him Though they shouted out with glee, Rudolph the red nose r

Holiday Traditions Contest - CLOSED

8 deviations
Literature

Made-Up Transgressions

Eaten churches Soul-altering fetishism Human meat filling clear pipes Artistic cultists corrupting the prime species False and catastrophic accusations You press the splinters of the suffering and creative deeper into Their flesh to use their screams for music and Their blood for shitty tattoos So, take those empty urns out of the closet and donate them to The minorities you want to fucking slaughter Pluck the hypocrisy from dicks and pussies The world you want is boring as hell Get used to living near rainbows, gothic nightclubs, And film festivals that feature directors from other countries Embracing diversity will make life so much more enjoyable Those stories are cutting your kids But if that happens, that means you Have a project to work on Great for you, but terrible for them

Free and Blank Verse III

2902 deviations